Completely related to Elli. When I started to get annoyed by her self-deprecation, I had to remind myself that I'm exactly like her. I was bothered by the editing. And I'm not really buying that an educated heiress would use the word ain't in every other sentence and throw around double negatives, but maybe I'm just being nitpicky. Overall, I enjoyed the story and will now devote the rest of my life to finding my very own Shea Adler.